Copywriting tips: finally, 2-pay plan available on your next copywriting critique

I’ve been meaning to get this set up for a while, and now it’s fixed:

If you want a copywriting critique, there’s now a two-pay option available.

And yes, of course this comes with a 100% Money-Back Guarantee: If my recommendations don’t boost your response rates dramatically… then your critique is free.

I typically cover your entire piece, but there are 7 areas in particular that we focus on:

1.  Your headline

2.  Your opening line

3.  Your actual story or sales message

4.  Your offer

5.  Your compelling reason to act now (why should your buyers do this now, instead of waiting till later?)

6.  Your call to action (what it is you’re looking for them to do).  And…

7.  Your P.S.

And we usually talk about lots of stuff in between, like the strategy you’re using, along with your credibility, and so on.

Call Anne in my office if you have any questions.  (813-333-2463)

Now go sell something, Craig Garber

P.S.  Some people want to record these critiques, and that’s fine.  Actually, I encourage you to do this.  There’s usually so much information going back and forth on these calls, it would be virtually impossible to remember it, without recording the call.  So “Yes,” go ahead and record your call, no worries.